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Justice is Served

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Okay, there has been a slight change to the ending of "Once Upon a Wednesday"...

Originally, Blagden was going to commit suicide, but since he wanted to rule the world, it didn't quite fit. And I noticed it after ~greatcinalone23 pointed out that it was a bit odd.

And then, the newer ending I had seemed a bit odd to me, so I fixed it too.

So, now... it's even better.

After Blagden's troll fatally wounds Darryn, and after Edolie turns the troll to stone, Blagden knocks Edolie to the ground and takes the sacred rod. Suddenly, Wilona (who had been watching them with her pool of fire) breaks her law to always remain on the mountain, appears in a fiery rage, and grabs the rod out of his hand. She then tells him, "The blood of the innocent is on your hands. You have no right to hold this. The fire of your evil shall consume you."

Just then, she breaks the rod in half, and her hair becomes a huge snake, and eats the evil king for his crimes. The castle crumbles, and Broderick, Edolie, Darryn, and the others escape. Wilona turns into a small fireball, and guides Broderick and the others safely outside.

After the castle falls, the sorrow sets in. Darryn is dying, and tells Edolie how much he loves her, and he says, "Even if we never could have been together, I would still love you, and never marry." Edolie feels sad and tells him that they can marry because he's a prince. He smiles sadly and says, "That's when you said that you loved me. After you found out I was a prince."

Edolie cries, kisses him, and tells him that she loved him from the very first moment she'd met him. And of how she wanted to tell him sooner, but was afraid to because she would break his heart. And after she found out he was royal, she knew she had to tell him. He smiles happily knowing that she loved him from the start, and slowly tells her good-bye.

Broderick then turns to Wilona, and pleads her to heal his master, so Edolie can be happy. Wilona says, "I do not possess such power. My magic is limited." Suddenly, Wilona clasps her hands in prayer, and asks for the power to heal Darryn. A white light surrounds her, and she heals Darryn - from his wound, and his blindness. But as a result, her magic is weakened.

Wilona then decides to use that last of her magic to grant Broderick a reward for his unselfish plea, and changes into a She-Doolie, in order to make him happy.

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moonlitinuyasha1985's avatar

JUSTICE HAS BEEN SERVED!!!!!!!!!!